This essay was written by one of my composition students at the Elmwood Correctional Facility in Milpitas, California. These students write their essays entirely by hand and with no Internet resources. I am honored to share this lovely piece of writing with you. If you have a comment that you’d like me to share with Luis, please add it in the Comments section below.
It is said that people can motivate another person through rewards and punishments. Or does all motivation come from within? I think that people can be great motivators for others, but I would argue that the best motivator should come from within, regardless of the reward or the punishment.


